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LaF audition page 4

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i like the idea of Cricket narrating part of the story to someone else each time. hopefully the transition isn't confusing/choppy though.
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Ah~ Narrating to different folks? That's really quite a unique idea. I like it. The transition in this page is very clear with those clouds and the change from foggy word block to solid word bubble!